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when I opened my eyes I already knew what day it was (also knew that tomorrow will never be like this)… I gracefully flew down the stairs towards the living room where my mum had a mat w/ a flame glowing on it she was about to set a fire in the fireplace because she knew it would be a chilly day.

I flung my stuff on and leapt outside and literally dove straight into the white stuff I celebrated by swimming through the white icy stuff everybody had come out to celebrate some ppl made snow angels some ppl had snow fights it was the best day ever.

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today was the final day of building our stick house it may take a while no more than one day. my friends and I will meet up at the park and walk home from the park. frank will bring the door for the stick house on his radio flyer:

as we walk home we talk about what and who we will dress as for Halloween. frank’s dressing up as Frankenstein because it has his name in it. julie is going to go as a zombie cheerleader and Joseph will go as a where wolf when we got home, we got straight into it frank slipped the door into place while Joseph nailed the frame in. then things went wrong frank and Joseph got into a fight about nails and screws. joseph said that screws are better and frank stormed out of the room frank slammed the door and as the door slammed I knew that the twig house wouldn’t stand a chance.

 

breaking news!

 

“man found head first in small pond in Moonee ponds. witnesses reported that they heard a gurgling sound as they pass a pair of boots sticking out of the ground, lets go to Jim for more…” “Thanks Maria, it seems that the murder was simple the murder drowned him and had stuck him in the pond upside down… any ways as you can see he is wearing state of the art gumboots which are now 100% guaranteed no leaks👌👌👌👍👍👍👌 and one time offer- if you call now you will get not one but two state of the gum boots let me repeat two state of the art gumboots.”

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the big black thing that I owned was so fun to ride on. you can also go fast (not as fast as a car)it goes well on many terrain and is helpful and environment friendly when needing to get around. it is about on year old bought around about 4-16. it is something that can get me from school and home and vice versa and can get me to other places as well. it is also good exercise if you ride for long distances you can also add computers to your thing that can measure speed and how far you’ve gone.

 

 

 

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I love the park down the road it has such a green oval and the swings don’t make a sound. And you can go really high in them, you can also catch some REAL speed down the slide. but some things happened at the park everybody’s talking about at school. my school is called Brean Down primary school*. I was walking back from school when I saw it 2 gigantic footprints it was amazing how big they were. to be honest, because there is a military fort so close I think there was a bomb and a bomb disposal guy had to get to the truck and his feet must have sunk into the grass

 

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Today was the day I would travel to South America. It looks great I’m really excited. I go tomorrow at 3:00 pm. South America looks really nice. it’s so rain-foresty I wondered how much trails there was. I got packing.

I was out side my house waiting for my friend to pick me up because my friends were coming to. we were waiting outside the gate to the plane my friends and I were checking every thing here and ready.

I had the best view from my little window thingy were so high up, then it suddenly went dark.

 

The Lady in Blue

  • Big Question #1: What makes this book good?

I loved the twist at the very end, which helped resolve some tension in the story. I also observed that she used the element of surprise for the twist.

 

  • Big Question #2: What would make this book better?

On initial thought I said it was too long. But I couldn’t find anything to take/edit away when I reviewed it.

 

  • Big Question #3: What’s the one most important thing the author wants you to know?

I think in this text the author is telling you that its not just the people who have Alzheimer’s disease that suffer. It’s the people that care for them or love them too.

 

  • Big Question #4: Why did the writer write this?

Maybe to inform the reader on the sadness one might feel if a close relative suffers from memory loss.

 

  • Big Question #5: What does the audience need to know to understand and enjoy the book?

I think that the most vital bit was the 3 last sentences where the writer reveals the twist that the Lady in Blue is her mum.

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I always loved going out on trips and camping with my family but I never thought this was going to happen. We were walking along a dirt track, I’d never really cared about the signs saying ‘loose rocks’ or ‘hazardous cliffs’. I never stopped to see the dangers that were lurking behind every cliff and every boulder, I never stopped to think am I safe? Anyways we were walking along the track and people came rushing back they looked scared out of their wits. They were so scared they could only talk gibberish. Then it came rushing at us we kept to either side of the path as the boulder rolled down the trail.