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I love the park down the road it has such a green oval and the swings don’t make a sound. And you can go really high in them, you can also catch some REAL speed down the slide. but some things happened at the park everybody’s talking about at school. my school is called Brean Down primary school*. I was walking back from school when I saw it 2 gigantic footprints it was amazing how big they were. to be honest, because there is a military fort so close I think there was a bomb and a bomb disposal guy had to get to the truck and his feet must have sunk into the grass

 

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Today was the day I would travel to South America. It looks great I’m really excited. I go tomorrow at 3:00 pm. South America looks really nice. it’s so rain-foresty I wondered how much trails there was. I got packing.

I was out side my house waiting for my friend to pick me up because my friends were coming to. we were waiting outside the gate to the plane my friends and I were checking every thing here and ready.

I had the best view from my little window thingy were so high up, then it suddenly went dark.

 

The Lady in Blue

  • Big Question #1: What makes this book good?

I loved the twist at the very end, which helped resolve some tension in the story. I also observed that she used the element of surprise for the twist.

 

  • Big Question #2: What would make this book better?

On initial thought I said it was too long. But I couldn’t find anything to take/edit away when I reviewed it.

 

  • Big Question #3: What’s the one most important thing the author wants you to know?

I think in this text the author is telling you that its not just the people who have Alzheimer’s disease that suffer. It’s the people that care for them or love them too.

 

  • Big Question #4: Why did the writer write this?

Maybe to inform the reader on the sadness one might feel if a close relative suffers from memory loss.

 

  • Big Question #5: What does the audience need to know to understand and enjoy the book?

I think that the most vital bit was the 3 last sentences where the writer reveals the twist that the Lady in Blue is her mum.

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I always loved going out on trips and camping with my family but I never thought this was going to happen. We were walking along a dirt track, I’d never really cared about the signs saying ‘loose rocks’ or ‘hazardous cliffs’. I never stopped to see the dangers that were lurking behind every cliff and every boulder, I never stopped to think am I safe? Anyways we were walking along the track and people came rushing back they looked scared out of their wits. They were so scared they could only talk gibberish. Then it came rushing at us we kept to either side of the path as the boulder rolled down the trail.

My Forever Home

1.

The cat may be a bit scruffy or dirty as he is looking for a home. It is a cat and that sort of explains the bit were it thinks ‘he is worth purring for’. He finds a home, which is a big change in the story, which affects a lot of stuff.

2.

Cats are very smart animals so I would predict that this one is as smart as any other stereotypical cat. I don’t know how long he has been homeless for but he says he scavenges for food so he must be able to survive.

3.

I think this character is feeling hopeful about finding a new home for him to stay in. When the family lets him into the house I think that he gets more relaxed and doesn’t have to be as alert.

4.

I think he gets on pretty well with the family but at the start of the story it says he ‘had been booted out once too often’ which signifies that he didn’t get along with every owner.

5.

I think it believed that he could find a new home and that he can be independent. In the story it talks about how he walks for ‘miles from where he used to call home’, at the end he is part of the family and Ethan becomes his best friend and has found his forever family.

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It was -25° and I was trying to warm my hands by the small fire I had. The seals were making a racket outside it was like they were laughing at me for being so cold. I had 6 layers on and the icy wind still whipped through the door and I was still cold. 30 minutes later I fell asleep. My clock said I’d slept for 14 hours and when I walked out side the sun was out and the seals were still laughing. I was getting really annoyed by these seals and I was about to get my camera when I saw this baby one cutely laughing with its mum. I shot them both.

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my cushion was like a rock last night. I could barely sleep. I think it was because I was going to meet scarlet the awesomest violinist ever. I am her biggest fan. but some times i talk about her too much and I get annoying. I know so much about her i know she loves to keep her plants nice and watered and she named her violin Katy. I am so exited to meet her. she’s so beautiful and she’s only 20. oh. my. god I entered this writing competition and I won! that means i get to go vip to the concert!!!

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It was another boring day. At school. We were learning about Fractions but then the lights turned off, the teacher tried to turned on the lights but it wouldn’t work we’d have to work in the dark but I could barely see what I was doing. Then after 5 minutes of  darkness the lights flash on 5 minutes later they flash off. On, off, on, off but then the flash made me think this is pointless so I got up road my bike to the grid and shut off all power. the end.