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anyone is welcome to check this out!
I had been planning this day since I was 11. I knew I would be crazy… I knew it would be scary but wanted to do it, needed to do it. I would probably remember this for the rest of my life.
As I walk to the plane a thousand doubts went through my head. When the plane takes off I wanted to go home. As the altitude slowly climb so did my pulse. When the altitude was right, I knew I had to jump. everybody was looking at me-It reminded me of when I had to do a speech in front of the entire grade of 5-6s. I take a deep breath and step into the abyss.
so far this semester I have achieved:
– to create a more organized work space via only taking the materials in need for that period.
– to create a more organized plan before I start a draft of story.
I have not yet managed to:
– understand all my multiple tables that I have set to complete but I now understand the 7 M.T’s to 12.
– use Deep Discussion Question’s in my work.
during this term I am hoping to:
– to create a better understanding of clauses & sentence structure.
– to be able to produce quality poems.
I leap out of bed and carefully peak outside…
‘What the!?’ I say
A giant hand protrudes from the ground.
‘AARRRGGGGGHHH’ I yelp
I sprint to my parent’s bedroom and explain the preceding events
‘Its okay darling it was just a dream”
‘but mum it wasn’t’
‘darling go back to sleep’
I instantly look back and see, well a giant hand replacing where my bedroom was. This is not a good day.
‘mum I can’t go to sleep!’
I look back at the hand,’its, its complicated’
‘son go watch some t.v’ says dad
‘fine’ I say and slink off.
I literally glide down the four stories of stairs and gracefully land on the ground floor I leap through the sitting room, the dining room, the lounge room, the other sitting room and finally stop in the 2nd lounge room. I stare at the giant tree towering over me I run to the largest present and start ripping! by the end, there is a layer of present wrapping everywhere. I search around the tree, sifting through the wrapping. voi la! a present. I briskly open it, and. AND- oh just some random keys I take it to dad and he says its car keys.
‘Yaaaaay’ I scream but what colour should the car be???
goal: to create Emotion
STAIRS RIVER PINK COOKED NERVOUS
Light slowly seeped in through the curtains- Morning.
I blindly stumble down the stairs and find that mum & dad had cooked some pink Bacon & delicious eggs. I savour the breakfast & at the same time chomp it down. we then (as a family) strolled down to the local park and went adventuring down an old track we’ve never been on before. we were a little bit down the track when I turned around and my parents weren’t there. that’s when I started to get nervous. I run up ahead and find river blocking the path dead end. I was looking around frantically, I started sweating, I tried to take deep breaths but it didn’t help, I started yelling MUM! DAD! and collapsed to my knees, I’d lost my parents…
Goal: create better sizzling starts
Have you ever felt like you were on top of the world?- I have on my 10th birthday. It was time to open my presents and the first present was given to me by great grandma. It was a special ‘magical’ charm.
“Wow thanks, G-Grandma,” I say trying to put on my best fake smile.
“It was handed down generation to generation,” says G-Grandma.
The next day I take out the charm and a letter slips out. As I read the context of the letter I noticed the smile on my face. I hold the charm to the sun and the next thing I know my head had hit the ceiling.
KRR, KRR, KRR, KRR, KR-
ugh, stupid alarm clock, I think as I snooze the clock. ‘oh no’ I say to no one in particular ‘today is Shrek on ice, anything but Sherk on ice!’ today was the day that we go to Shrek on ice my little sister has been begging our mum regulary for weeks on end, and well, I guess mum gave in.
this is gonna traumatize me forever.
when we got there the glass entrance door. the door was weirdly tinted lime. we took our seats and I bought some chips and while I was eating them I realized it was extreme chilly flavored Oh my god it felt like flame people were dancing on my tongue!
“I can’t believe how quickly there destroying the forest” my mum says.
“I know right, I really should explore the mysterious forest 1 more time” I reply
“You totally should.” exclaims my mum.
“Ok then I will” I say with new enthusiasm
I stroll into the forest and travel as far as I can until I don’t remember any of my surroundings…
I. am. lost.
I turn around and start back to were I think the direction of home was.
I keep on walking until I find a door…
I look into the door and I see, well nothing.
I dont know what to do so I take a deep breath and step through into darkness..
‘I want to spend some money today.’ I say to my self
so I stroll to the expensive shop and grabbed the purple leopard print purse and walked to the tennis court suddenly tennis balls come thundering down on my head.
‘AARGH!’ i shout
as tennis balls rain on me. after they stop I look at where it’s coming from and a leopard is using the ball serving machine.
‘ what the #@$! stupid leopard!’
more balls smash into the side of my head I stumble and trip that’s when I see the racket I reach out for it I then shield myself and I hear a growl/ roar noise and the tennis balls stop.